Owner of TS ( http://www.socetybad ger.com )
Age 90, Male
JC
Uk
Joined on 6/27/07
Posted by Armour - July 29th, 2011
As I have nearly finished my prior website and simply need to wait for the product to be finalised.
I am releasing a new one! That offers a free service!
A way for you creative buggers to make money and a way for those who need a video or animation done to contact those freelancers available for the job.
The solution is swivel. I am building swivel on the same template I made " ArmourTech " with.
Only the front page has been completed so far, tell me what you think ! :
Err hey man, that would be SOOO elegant
Open, wide white spaces and in the middle pure colorness (example image of an example video).
I mean, colorful like this here
<a href="http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/1/22994000/ngbbs4e134f0d9c18d.jpg">http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/1/22994000/
ngbbs4e134f0d9c18d.jpg</a>
But the idea was to limit colours. Notice that your eyes seem to be attracted the to the red and green boxes which are the subject of the website.
If I have too many colours, I cannot manipulate the user to the areas I wish the individual to pay the most attention to.
You think it would be more elegant if I put more colours in it ?
hmm interesting, I like it for one. but was the loading flash saying "welcome" necessary?
Sorry about that but that will come off as soon as I purchase the website off of Wix. I will only do that when I complete the website.
The image would help to keep visitors coming, and staying longer.
Also, you can make the bird look significantly in one direction.
Other than that, make your buttons on your site to buttons. I can SELECT the text of the big button in the middle, and If I press the left mouse button, nothing happens.
Very unprofessional, tsk.
You also may want to make the navi to the top bigger (as newgrounds'). Helps making the users look around.
Ya my suggestions probably suck.
1. What image ?
2. What bird?!
3. No, that is not the text you are selecting, that is the giant header which has not been linked to anything yet. Hence " Under Construction "
4. I will take the suggestion under consideration.
Thanks for the review though.
To many Trojans
You what ?...if you mean " Trojans " As in viruses.
That is impossible. The website is pure Flash written in clean AS3 by Wix with flawless coding. No ads have been placed either.
:^(
You appearently forget conservations pretty quickly.
Oh the colourful bird !
Sorry...but I dont think the bird would match the scene
Cryetk has a damn EYE to present the beauty of the engine (it makes games and mods with really good graphics / physics).
You need something too. You have like nothing on your website.
A macaw would still own.
<a href="http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/1/22994000/">http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/1/22994000/
</a>
ngbbs4e134f0d9c18d.jpg
Quicksmasher
Errrrrr
I don't feel like reviewing it.
But -1 because of the too typical advertisment.
+1 if you put some more colors in it.
Armour
Too typical of an advertisment ? I dont quite understand. Do you mean like it has been done too many times before ?